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1、历年考研英语写作范文历年考研英语写作范文(1997(1997-20120122)1997世界烟草总产量世界烟草总产量世界吸烟人口比例世界吸烟人口比例世界每年吸烟损失世界每年吸烟损失Themajorityofpeoplewouldagreethatcigarettesmokinghascausedseriousproblems.Butthetobaccocompaniesinsistthattheycontributegreatlytotheworldeconomybypayingtaxestothegovernmentandemployinghundredsofworkers.Personal

2、lyIbelievethatcigaretteproductionandconsumptionthreatenstodomoreharmthangood.Firstlysmokingisresponsibleanyfataldiseasessuchaslungcancerheartdiseasesandsoon.Accordingtothesurveytobaccoconsumersaccountforabout20%oftheworldpopulationandamongthemthreemillionpeoplediefromsmoking-relateddiseaseseveryyear

3、.Thefactthattheoutputoftobaccoproductionisreducedfrom14.364billionpoundsin1994to14.2billionpoundsin1995alsosuggeststhatpeoplehavecometorealizethenegativeeffectsofsmoking.Secondlytobaccoconsumptionisextremelywastefulofmoney.Asisindicatedinthepictures200billionUSdollarsislostduetosmokingeachyear.Obvio

4、uslythetotallossofmoneyaroundtheglobesubstantiallyexceedsthegainintheindustry.Inconclusionastheeconomicdevelopmentaimsatmakingourlifebetterwecannotsacrificeourhealthforshort-termfinancialbenefits.Ifwehavetospendmoreandmoremoneyprovidingmedicalservicesforthosewhosufferfromsmokingrelatedillnessestheno

5、tionofpromotingeconomyviatobaccoproductionisnotjustifiable.Itishightimethatwefoughtforthetotaltobaccoban.1999高分作文高分作文(1513分分)FromthesegraphswecandrawaconclusionthatwiththegrowthofhumanpopulationthenumberofspecieshasdecreasedrapidlyinAmericaandsomespecieshaveevenvanishedfromourplanet.Whydoesthispheno

6、menonappearIthinkthereareseveralpossiblereasonsforthis.Firstwitharapidgrowthofpopulationmoreandmorepeoplecametolivewheresomewildspecieshavebeenliving.Thenthesespecieshavetomovetootherplaces.Someofthemprobablycannotadapttothenewenvironmentanddie.Secondalthoughmanypeoplelookonthewildlifeastheirfriends

7、somepeoplemaynotthinkso.Theycatchalotofwildanimalsandselltheminordertogetmoremoney.Thirdwiththedevelopmentoftheindustrythenaturalbalanceandtheecologicenvironmentaredestroyed.Thedeforestationhasbecomemoreandmoreserious.Sosomeofthewildlivesbecomehomelessandextinct.InordertoprotectthewildlifeIhavesomes

8、uggestions.Firstthegovernmentsshouldmakelawstopreventthemfrombeingcaughtandkilled.Secondthegovernmentsshouldeducatepeopletolovethenatureandprotectit.Thirdasforourselvesweshouldtakepracticalactionstoprotectourlivingenvironment.评语内容符合要求，包括了图中说明“effect”的有关信息。语言流畅，层次分明，句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确，文章长度符合要求。但还有少数错误出现

9、。2000高分作文高分作文(1)Asisshowninthepictureswecanseeclearlythatwiththeincreaseofcommercialfishingthenumberoffishessharplydecreased.Inonepicturetherewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyonefishing-boatin1900.Onthecontraryin1995therewasonlyonefishbutmanyfishing-boats.Thepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdueattentio

10、nhastobepaidtothedecreaseofoceanresources.Owingtoover-fishingthenumberoffisheshasobviouslydecreased.Ifweletthissituationgoasitiswewontknowwherefishisinthefuture.Bythattimeourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.Thereforeitisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Foronethingweshouldappealtoourauthori

11、tiestomakestrictlawstocontrolcommercialfishing.Foranotherweshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethattheoceanresourcesareveryvitaltous.Onlyinthiswaycanweprotectouroceanresources.AlsoIbelievethatwehumanbeingscanovercomethisdifficultyandwewillhaveabrightfuture.给分14分评语内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；文章通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样；用词面较宽；虽

12、有个别不妥之处，但该生基本功较好；表达能力较强；长度符合要求。(2)Nowwecanseetwopicturesaboutthehistoryofworldcommercialfishing.Thefirstpictureshowsusafishing-boatandawaterrichinfishin1990.Onthecontrarywelearnthataccordingtothesecondpicturethefishesdecreasesharplytoonlyonewiththeincreaseofboatsin1995.Thepurposeofthepicturesistowar

13、nusthatthesearesourcesarebeingruinedandweneedtoprotectouroceannow.AsfarasIamconcernedthiskindoffishingattributestothedriveofmoney.Toearnmoneysomepeoplejustwanttocatchfishwhetheritissmallorbig.Secondlysomepeopleignorefishhasitsgrowingtime.Excessivefishinginashorttimecausesdecreaseoffish.Inadditionthe

14、developmentofmodemsciencewillalsoacceleratetheprocess.Nowadaysmanypeoplehavegraduallyfoundtheproblem.Theyappealtotakingmeasurestodevelopingtheresourceoffishandcontrolfishingforcommercialaimwhichisalsothepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures.Firstthegovernmentshouldlaycounter-lawstostoptheoperationofcommer

15、cialfishing.Seconditisaworldproblemsothegovernmentsmustdecidetopunishpeoplewhofishtoomuch.Toconcludeitisclearthatthefutureforfishwillbebrightwiththesolutionoftheproblem.给分11分评语内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达基本清楚，文字连贯，句式变化较多；结构与用词有少量一般性错误，长度符合要求。2001(1)Itisgenerallybelievedthatloveisahottopicwhichismosttalkedabout

16、.ThisistruenotonlyinChinabutalsoinothercountries.Weliveindifferentcountriesspeakdifferentlanguagesbutloveissomethingcommontousall.Buthowtoshowlovemaybedifferentwithdifferentpeopleindifferentcountries.Thisissomethingweshouldgivemorethoughtto.Asshowninthepictureloveislikealampwhichshinesbrightestindarkplaces.Thistellsusasimpletruth:Loveislikealamp.Itismostvaluablewhenitismostneeded.ForexampleonceIsawaforeignladygetlostinthestreet.ShecouldnotspeakChineseandnobodyseemedtobeabletohelpher